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Friday, 29 April 2011

Untitled Story - A plan for forest camping - Fun fully in Forest !!!


" Waaoo ! Aarav kya location hai ! How romantic ! " Priya ko toh pehli hi nazar me hi camping spot raas aa gaya .
" Hey ! Dekho na kitna cool temperature hai yahaan ka . Its gonna be an awesome camping venture . " Aakhir jisne jagah chuni hai , woh bhi toh taareef karega khud ki aur iss jagah ki .
" Sach me vishnu , yeh romantic location aur tum mere saath . I really love this yaar ! "  Soniya ko bhi jagah bhaa gayi . 
Waise sach me yeh jagah bilkul sahi hai . Raju kab pahunchega yaha pe ?
" Woh aata hoga . Ruk , main phone karke puchta hun . " Aarav ke paas mobile hai toh usne Raju ko phone kiya . Phone se yaad aaya ki yaar mujhe college me 6 mahine hone jaa rahe hai aur aaj tak main bina mobile ke ghum raha hun . Khair koi baat nahi . Iss exam ke baad le lunga ek cell phone aur phir uske baad soniya ka phone lene woh Kumbhi ke paas nahi jaana padega . Chalo ! kuch kaam ho jaaye . Tent lagaana hai , bonfire jalaana hai aur phir masti karni hai . 


" Guys ! i have a plan . " Sanchit ka dimaag kaam karna shuru karta hai toh sab kuch majedaar ho jaata hai . Hum aag ke charo-ore aaraam se baithe hai . Kuch bhi nahi hai siwaaye baaton ke .Tabhi sanchit ke khaali bheje me kuch plan aaya . " Lets play truth or.......truth or fare ? " 
Aarav aur hum sabne iss game ke baare me sunaa tha par shayad game ka naam hai truth or dare . Aarav ko bhi laga ki sanchit kuch nayaa laaya hai - " Fare ? Yeh kuch nayaa lagta hai yaar ! Kaise khelna hai ? " 
" Dekho ! yeh rahi meri beer ki bottle . Yeh maine isse aise ghumaaya . Ab iss bottle ka muuh jiske saamne ruka , hum usse puchenge truth or fare . " 
Yeh toh hume pata hai . Kuch nayaa batao be ? 
" Aur be doston ! Hii simmy , hii priya . I m here . " Dekhiye cherry on the cake isko kehte hai . Bore ho rahe the hum sab , ab raju aa gaya . Asli majaa toh ab aayega . 
" Aa na dude ! hum sab khelne waale hai - truth or fare . " 
Sanchit truth bolne me itna zor diya jaise ki hamesha sach hi bolta ho . Itni buland aawaaz me usne sach ko apne muuh se nikaala ki saare sadhu uske aage fail ho jaaye . 
Raju ko game sahi nahi laga - " Abe yeh kaun sa faltu game hai be ? " 
Pata nahi charon ladkiyaan itna shaant kyu baithi hai . Waise ladkiyaan tab sabse jyada acchi lagti hai jab woh chup rehti hai . Par ladko ki yehi toh samasya hai ki ladkiyaan jyada samay tak chup nahi reh sakti . Simmy bol hi padi - " Guys ! sun toh lo ki san kehna kya chata hai . " 
Dekho bol padi savitri . Ab toh sanchit ko koi nahi rok sakta - " Waisa hi game hai jaisa hum khelte hai . Fare to bas maine new thing ke liye bol diya . No thoughts behind it . " 
Lo ji ! yeh huwi na andho waali baat . Aise hi bol diya . Shayad ab aarav aur priya ko ek-doosre se time mill gaya aur aarav bhi bola - " Bottle ki jagah , sanchit ko spin karaate hai . It will be more fun . " 
Aisi hi choti - choti baatein toh mann halka kar deti hai . 
Batao , hum yehi nahi decide kar paa rahe ki khelna kya hai toh aage ki raat ka kya sochenge . Itni der se main chup hun kyuki mujhe intezaar hai uss cheej ka jo yahaan mere liye khatraa ho sakti hai . Main bilkul satark rehna chahta hun kyuki apne kaaran apne doston ko kisi tarah ki musibat me nahi daalna chahta . 
Waise bhi bak-bak karne ke liye mere alaawa 7 log aur bhi hai . Unme se ek toh bak-bak ka baadshah hai , Sanchit - " Haan - haan ! mujhe spin karna . Par har baar tere pe hi muuh kholunga main . " 
" Chill be ! gussa nahi karo . Warna teri pol khul jaayegi . " Raju ne aarav ki side me bola kyuki ab sanchit ki lagne waali hai . 
" Kya khul jaayegi bro ? " Waise sanchit gussa toh huwa par raju ko kaise bol sakta hai kuch isiliye end me bhai keh diya . 
" Arre ! yehi ki gusse me teri bolti aur bhi bandh ho jaati hai . " Raju ne phir se entertain kar diya hum sabhi ko . Bhale hi iss baar nishaana sanchit hai par har baar bhi sanchit hi hota hai . 
Ab aarav kyun chup rahe , woh to raju se bhi jyada bol sakta hai - " Accha ! I have a question . Jab graham bell ne phone ki discovery ki thi toh sabse pehle kya huwa tha ? " 
Waah ! sawaal toh sochne waala hai . Sab soch bhi rahe hai . Kisi ke paas jawaab bhi nahi hai . 
" Socho mat guys ! main batata hun ." Aarav ne pucha toh aarav hi batayega - " Sabse pehle bell ko sanchit ke 2 missed calls aaye the . " 
Phir se sanchit bana mohra aur joke tha yeh doosra . Sab phir se sanchit pe hanse lage . Par hume usko jyada nahi chidhaana chayiye kyuki hum sab aaye toh ussi ki gaadi me hai . Kaheen leke chala gaya toh ? 
Mere bagal me soniya baithi hai par kuch bol nahi rahi . Shayad uske liye mera saath hi bahut hai . Mere kandhe pe sar rakhke aaraam se baithi hai , shayad itna aaraam usko apne sofe pe bhi nahi milta hoga . Agar main nazrein aage karuun toh nishita saamne hi baithi hai par chehre pe ek jhoothi muskaan ke saath . Sabhi logon ke liye toh muskura rahi hai par andar se dukhi hai .
" Guys ! ab mere pe stupid jokes crack karna bandh karo toh hum game shuru kare ? " Sanchit ne kaha ab bas . Game shuru karte hai chalo . 
Sab raazi ho gaye aur usne bottle ghumaayi .Jitne der tak bottle spin kar rahi thi , utna hum sab soch rahe the ki please hum pe na ruke . Par kismat toh dekho , bottle soniya ke saamne ruki sabse pehle . 
Aarav sabse pehle muuh khola - " Main puchunga soniya se ! " Waise bahut haq se usne puchna chaha - " Toh finally batado hum sabko ki vishnu se pyaar kaise huwa ? " 
Aarav ke sawaal pe sabne taali bajaai . Sawaal mere upar hai bhale hi bottle soniya ke taraf ruki . Soniya bhi sab kuch bolne ko taiyyar hai - " Class 10th me woh mere side me baitha tha april 26th . Sab boys ki seat change huwi thi aur vishnu ko mere bagal me baitha diya teacher ne . Miss . Shweta , haan yehi naam tha teacher ka . Pehle toh woh mujhe weird sa laga par jaise-jaise time beetta gaya , hum ek doosre se sab kuch kehne - sunne lage . Mujhe tab isse pyaar huwa jab vishnu ne mujhe bachaya tha . " 
Priya ko yeh baat interesting lagne lagi toh usne bhi puch liya - " Kisse bachaya tha yaar ? " 
Soniya ki baat phir se shuru - " Hum logon ke school me assembly hoti thi . Uske liye sabhi classes school campus me assemble hote the. Humara class 2nd floor pe tha . Neeche utarna padta tha aur phir upar do floor chadhna bhi padta tha . Ek din upar jaate time seedhi pe se mera pair phisal gaya , main gir hi jaati par vishnu ne mujhe bachaya . Main seedhe uske baahon me giri . Tab se he is my hero . " 
Priya - " Oh ! theek ussi tarah jiss tarah chutti ke din girne se bachaya tha ? " 
" Haan ! hamesha meri help karta aaya hai vishnu . Main hi samajhne me der kardi thi par now i m very happy coz he is with me . "  Jo bhi bola , jitna bola par mujhe bhaa gaya . Dill yeh baatein sunne ko kab se intezaar kar raha tha . Aaj soniya ne bol hi diya . 
Chalo round one over , ab baari hai second time spin ki . Sanchit ne phir bottle ghumaayi - " Now lets see whose chance .  Ohh ! vishnu . Teri baari hai dude . "  
Ok ! i take truth .
" Pata tha dare to tu kar hi nahi sakta . " Mujhse bhi aarav hi puchega - " So tell me , kabhi bhi soniya pe gussa yaa hate kind of feeling aayi tumhare andar ? " 
Mere jawaab dene se pehle soniya ne keh diya - " I dnt think ki vishnu kabhi mujhe hate kiya hoga . " 
Par iss baar mere paas alag jawaab hai - Actually ek time hate kiya tha . 
Meri baatein soniya ke liye thoda surprising hai - " Really ? U hated me ? Batao toh kab . " 
Actually , soniya jab mujhse alag huwi thi tab main bilkul paagal sa ho gaya tha. Phir soniya ne next year apna school bhi badal liya . Uss moment i hated her coz she left me alone . Ek baar socha bhi nahi ki main kya karunga . 
" Sorry baby ! tab main bahut choti thi . Pehchaan nahi paayi ki main kya chahti hun . Par ab toh main aa gayi na . Tumhare paas . " 
Phir soniya mere kandhe pe sar rakhi aur maine uska haath thaam liya . Par shayad yeh sab dekhke nishita ka dukh aur badh gaya - " Guys ! mujhe neend aa rahi hai . So m going to tent now . " 
Sanchit ne  usse rukne ke liye kaha - " Arre ! abhi toh game shuru huwa hau nishi . Wait na baby ! " 
" No sanchit ! mere sar me dard hai . " Itna kehke woh uthi aur tent ke taraf badh gayi .
par humne usse jaane diya kyuki hume laga ki she needs some time alone . Humne game roka nahi aur aage khelte gaye . 

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Tuesday, 26 April 2011

Untitled Story - A plan for forest camping - Shrine Tunes !!!


Mandir ko bhagwan ka doosra ghar kehte hai . Kabhi suna nahi ki bhagwan ka bheja huwa doot usse milne mandir me gaya ho . Aaj main jaa raha hun , ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai . Kisi se yeh ehsaas baant bhi nahi sakta . Khud hi iss ehsaas ko peena hoga . Socha ki ek mandir hi toh hai , bas andar jaana hai , bhagwan ki murti ke aage haath jodna hai aur prasad leke baahar aa jaana hai . Par phir bhi ek ajeeb si hulchul mach rahi hai andar . Pehli baar thode hi mandir jaa raha hun . Na hi akele hun , mere saath mere sabhi dost bhi hai . Soniya ne mera ek haath apne haathon me liya huwa hai . Mandir ki seedhiyaan chadhne me itna samay lagaunga toh andar pahunchme me saal beet jaayega . Jaise hi maine mandir ki aakhri aur sabse upar wali seedhi pe paav rakha , mandir me ujaala sa ho gaya . Achanak saare diyo me chamak aa gayi . Sabhi diye jagmagaane lage . Mujhe yeh toh samajh aa gaya ki yeh meri wajah se huwa hai . Par kisi ko mujhpe koi shak  jaisa nahi huwa . Mandir me aisa pehli baar huwa hai aur wo bhi din ke ujaale me . Bahut hi bada hall hai , kayi murtiyaan hai aur har murti ke paas ek sadhu . Kya pata kaun sa saccha hai aur kaun sa dhongi hai  ! 


" Chal ! pehle waha chalte hai ." Sanchit ne hum sabko mandir ki sabse badi murti ki taraf chalne ko kaha . Toh hum bhi chal diye . Mandir ki deewarein unchi hai , aur gol gumbat jo ekdum unchaayi pe hai woh safed rang ka gadaa huwa hai . Aisa hi ek mandir mere shaher me bhi hai magar wo iss wale se thoda chota lagta hai . " Maatha teko guys ! " Sanchit toh aise bol raha hai jaise humme se koi aaj tak mandir aaya hi nahi hai . " We know stupid ! " Usko seekhane ke liye simmy ne jawaab de diya . Waise jo baba jaise dikhne waale baba saamne baithe hai woh tumhare rishtedaar hai kya ? " Seriously ! No " Sanchit ka majaak udaane me kitna kajaa aata hai hume . Humne sar jhukaaya aur ek - ek karke prasad lete gaye . Baba prasad toh aise baant rahe hai jaise koi sone ki chain baant rahe ho . Ek haath me sirf mishri ka ek daana . Woh mishri ek toh itni choti hai aur usme bhi ek daana , bhaari kanjusi . Mandir me bhi recession dikha . Mere aage sabne prasad ko apne haathon me liya aur aage chalte bane . Mere theek aage soniya hai aur uske prasad lene ke baad aayi meri baari . Baba mere haathon me prasad rakhne se pehle mujhe dekhne lage. Kamaal hai ! mujhe dekhke thode se hairaan bhi hai aur muskura bhi rahe hai . 


Kya huwa baba ? Prasad dijiye ! 
" Aap yahaan pehli baar aaye hai na ? " 
Yeh kaisa sawaal hai ? 
" Nahi ! bas puch rahe hai . Mandir me pehle itni shakti nahi bhaapi hai humne . " 
Shayad unhe kuch aisa dikha jo sabko nahi dikh raha hai . Kaheen woh kuch aisa na bolde jo koi jaanta nahi . Isiliye maine baat kaat ke kaha - Baba ! prasad . 
" Aapke aane se mandir me roshni aa gayi hai . Sab jagmaga gaya hai . " 
Soniya mere aage hi hai aur sab sun bhi rahi hai . Baaki sab aage badh chuke hai . Main iss baar kuch nahi bola . Mujhse itne jhooth nahi bole jaate aur woh bhi mandir me bhagwan ke saamne . Kuch ulta-seedha muuh se nikal jaata toh raaz saamne aa jaata . Main socha ki prasad liye bina aage nikal jaaun par soniya ne rok diya - " Arre ! prasad toh le lo . "  Mujhe rukna pada aur maine phir se apne dono haath phaila diye baba ke samne . Baba ne prasad toh diya par ek se jyada daane diye - " Aap jo kahenge , wahi hoga . Sab kuch aapke upar jo hai . " Muskurate huwe main waha se aage badh gaya . Soniya ke paas phir se sawaal hai - " Woh baba aise kyu bol rahe the ? " Maine jyada kuch nahi kaha -  Mujhe kya pata ? Shayad umar ka takazaa hoga . Bas mere itna kehte , soniya hanse lagi . Soniya toh chup ho gayi par woh baba kaheen samajh toh nahi na gaye . Kaheen unhe sach nahi na pata lag gaya ? Iska matlab unhe meri shaktiyon ka andaaza mill gaya . Agar unhe yeh pata lag sakta hai toh shayad mujhe aise mandiron me jaana bandh kar dena chayiye warna sabhi mujhe pehchaan sakte hai . Sab nahi par woh jo sach me bhagwan ke shraddhaalu hai . Dhongi baba toh agar jannat bhi pahunch jaaye toh bhi bhagwan ko nahi pehchaan sakte . 


Mandir ke darshan toh kar liye par ab baari hai masti karne ki . Camping spot humaara intezaar kar raha hoga . Abhi tak toh jitna kuch huwa , mere liye bahut hai par aage kya hoga kisne dekha . Jo khatra mere doston pe mandraa raha hai uska bhi dhyaan dena hoga . Jungle me masti toh hogi par dekhte hai ki kya hai jo mera intezaar kar raha hai . 

Monday, 25 April 2011

Untitled Story - A plan for forest camping - The Highways Turns !!!


2 Mahindra Bolero , ek ki driving kar raha hai Sanchit jisme baithe hai 3 log - main , Soniya aur Nishita aur doosre ki  driving kar rahe hai Aarav aur usme baithe hai Priya aur Simmy . Soch rahe honge ki Raju kaha hai . Waise Raju bhi aayega lekin apni rajdoot se . Woh seedhe camping spot pe pahuch jaayega . Waise safar toh bahut chota nikla , par humaari gaadi me sirf sanchit aur soniya hi baatein kar rahe the . Soniya mere baare me aur sanchit apne baare me bol raha tha . Khair jungle se pehle mandir jaana hai . Main mandir bahut kam hi jaata tha par ab mujhe mandir me apna ghar sa lagta hai .  Shayad yeh badlaav ka asar hai mujhpe . Jo kabhi mandir ke saamne sar nahi tekta tha , aaj wo mandir me darshan karne ki jidd kar raha hai . Waise sanchit bhi kamaal ka banda hai , ek hi bolero me saaton log aa jate par usse 2 bolero bulaane ka shauk jo hai . 


Haan ! pahuch gaye mandir . Baap re ! kitna bada maidaan hai mandir ke saamne . 
Mere hairaan hone ki wajah jaayas hai kyuki gaadi park karne ki itni badi jagah toh shaheron me bhi nahi hoti hai . Sanchit bhi dekhke hairaan hai - " Haan yaar ! its quite big outside . "  Humaari gaadi pehle pahunchi aur doosri gaadi theek baad . Gaaid band karke sanchit aur hum aage badhne lage , mandir ki taraf . Par Aarav achanak se chillaaya - " Oye San ! gaadi sambhaal ! " Pehle toh humne dekha nahi toh samajh nahi aaya ki aarav kyun chilla raha hai . Phir jab main peeche ghooma toh dikha ki humaari gaadi reverse jaa rahi hai . Oye ! tune hand-break nahi lagaya kya ? 
Sabhi apni baat jaldi - jaldi kehne lage . Arre Sanchit ! roko yaar . Par sanchit toh apni jagah se hilne me bhi darr raha hai . Gaadi dheere-dheere main highway pe jaa rahi hai . Hum sabhi yeh sochne lage ki gaadi kaun rokne jaayega . Chaaron ladkiyaan toh ek-doosre ka haath thaam ke dekhne lagi . Sanchit itna darra huwa hai ki uska jaana toh banta hi nahi aarav gaadi ke paas hai par jab tak woh daudke pahuchega humaari gaadi sadak ke doosri ore khaai me gir jaayegi . Ab shayad meri baari hai ki main hi kuch karoon. Main jitna tej ho sake utna tej bhaaga . Kuch hi der me main gaadi tak pahuch gaya , par uss samay tak gaadi highway ke beecho-beech pahunch chuki hai . Gaadi ke khidhki ke sheeshe khule hai toh maine usme se apna haath andar daala aur break lagake gaadi rokli . Abhi sab yehi dekhke chauk gaye the ki main itni tej kaise daud gaya ki saamne se ek truck bahut hi teji se meri taraf aa rahi thi . Main jab tak gaadi ka dawaaza kholta aur baithke usse aage karta , tab tak truck mujhe kuchal chuka hota . Truck ka driver sharaab ke nashe me hai aur mujhe dikh gaya ki uski nazar sadak pe nahi hai . 


" Vishnu ! watch out ! " Soniya cheekhi kyuki usse saamne se aati truck dikh gayi . Phir sabki nazar uspe gayi . 
" Vishnu ! come back ! " Ab nishita bhi sahem gayi , agar main gaadi chodh ke sadak ke doosri ore chala jaata toh mujhe kuch nahi hoga par gaadi ko main bacha sakta hun . Shakti toh hai , uska istemaal bhi kar leta hun . Shayad pehli mulaakaat yehi hai . Truck ka driver ab bhi mujhe nahi dekh raha aur na hi sadak pe , saara dhyaan toh uska apni sharaab ki botal pe hai . Main gaadi ke peeche se aage khada ho gaya aur truck bhi takraane tak aa gayi , " Vishnu " Sabhi ki cheekh nikal gayi , unke liye toh yeh meri maut hi hai . Sab daud ke mere paas aa gaye - par main wahi khada hun apni jagah pe , jaha pehle khada tha . Aur truck ? Aur truck  mere theek saamne . Maine apne haath se truck ko rok diya tha . Theek mere saamne hi truck ruk gayi. Ruki kya , maine apne ek haath se roki . Sawaalon ka silsila toh ab shuru hoga . Sabse pehle soniya mere kareeb aayi aur aate hi mere gale lag gayi . Aur jaise hi soniya mere gale lagi toh mujhe laga jaise meri zindagi mujhse mill gayi . " Vishnu ! tum theek toh ho na ? O god ! " Uska sawaal uske andar ke pyaar ko darshaata hai . Ajeeb sa darr aur bechaini hai uski aawaaz me . Main kuch bolta usse pehle sab mujhpe toot pade . Aarav -" Abe ! tu theek hai ? Thank god ! " Sanchit pehle mere paas aaya par mujhse kuch bolne se pehle Truck driver ko kheencha - " Dude ! tujhe road pe dikhta nahi kya ? "  Sanchit ko aarav ne bhi saath diya - " Abe saale ! sadak tere baap ki hai kya ? " Aarav ne toh driver ka gala hi daba liya . Arre chodho na yaar ! Jaane do ! 
Ab shayad sriver ko hosh aa gaya - " Bhaiya ji ! mujhe dikha nahi . Maafi , galti ho gayi . " Par aarav apna saara gussa nikaalna chahta hai - " Kya galti be ? Sharaab peeke gaadi chalaata hai . Ab toh police hi dekhegi tujhe . "  Driver bhi haar nahi maanne wala , woh seedhe apne dono haath jodke gidgidaane laga - " Maaf kar dijiye saahab . Mujhe dikha nahi sadak pe baau ji hai . Police ko mat bulaayiye saahab ! " Sanchit ne aarav se uska gala chudwaaya . Chodh yaar ! Jaane do isko . Bahut jaddo-jahad ke baad driver chala apni raah pe aur humne apni gaadi waapis parking pe khadi kee aur chal diye mandir ke andar . Ab dekhte hai ki sab apne sawaal kaise karte hai . 


" Hey ! woh truck tumne kaise rokli aur woh bhi apni ek haath se ? " Soniya tab se bilkul mere ek haath pakad ke chal rahi hai . Shayad uss vaakye ke baad woh mujhe akele ek pal bhi nahi chodhna chahti . Bilkul mere ek haath se chipki huwi . Maine truck nahi roki thi soniyo .  " Nahi maine dekha tha . Tumne apne haath se truck roki thi . " Nahi soniyo ! truck driver ne roki thi . Maine toh bas apne bachaav me apna haath aage kiya tha . More of fear than safety . " Hmm ! jo bhi hai , tum waha se bhaag bhi toh sakte the ? " Soniya ke iss sawaal me nishita ne bhi saath diya - " Tum theek ho shayad yeh bhagwan ke wajah se . Kya zaroori hai ki tum apne se pehle gaadi ko bachaao ? "  Arre ! agar gaadi nahi bachaata toh sanchit ke dad usse khaa jaate , mera kya hai . Main toh bas aise hi hun . Maine baat ko ghoomane ki koshish ki . Soniya - " Tum aise hi nahi ho , samjhe ? Tum bahut important ho mere liye . Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh mera kya hota ? Do you hav any idea how much i love you ? " Waise iss baar soniya ne apne baawnaao ko kathor shabd me kaha . Mujhe kuch nahi hota  aur na hi kuch hoga . Jab tak tum saath ho , kuch nahi hoga . Jab tak hum mandir ke andar nahi pahunche tab tak sawaalo ka silsila khatam nahi huwa . 

Sunday, 24 April 2011

Movie Pack-Up Tym - Dum Maaro Dum !!!

"Goa me bhi saanp baste hai aur saale kya danste hai ! " This line truly fits all well with the movie . Dum Maaro Dum is Ramesh Sippy's belt of a movie . After Bluffmaster , he again comes up with Junior Bachchan in this one and What a come back ! 


Lets start with the story line -


Kya aapke aas-paas aise log hai jo har samay sirf nashe me dhut rehte hai ? Kya kabhi humne socha hai ki nashe ki iss duniya me kitne problems aur complications hai ? Bach gaye toh bache warna death pakki . DMD takes you out and out close to the young generations new pasand - Drugs . Nashe me dhut rehne walo pe ek waar hai DMD.
If you were missing a good movie the entire year , here is something that can move you up. As the promos and promotions were done for DMD , it is indeed more than that . DMD starts with a 17 year old loverboy but over-ambitious and rather helpless himself , Lorry who luves a girl Taniya . Both applied for a foreign ticket but unfortunately Lorry 's  application got rejected and Taniya flows to USA . Lorry comes in contact with a guy Rikky who is the charm of drug dealers. Illegal deal between Lorry and Rikky puts Lorry in jail  where he is caught by ACP Vishnu Kamath . Now , the fine art of story telling is to be captured here . ACP Kamath was a policeman who was known for taking bribes for his work . But after a big accident , the way of dealing with crimes changed for him . Losing his wife and a son in a car accident completely changes his mind-set and he starts a life of honesty. The reason behind the accident that the other person was lost in drugs and so a ruthless and careless driving causes him to lose his family . The way the accident was shot is really heart-pounding . Its really a Ramesh Sippy art of shooting . Lorry is arrested before being a adult . Then Goa's charge is given to Kamath i.e. Abishek Bachchan . After so many out and out flops , AB finally delivers a big powerful and impactful role playing . He lives ACP Kamath indeed. Lorsa baiscuita , the mafia of drugs world comes under the blink of ACP Kamath . Then the search for a mysterious underworld gangster Michael Barbosa begins . He is a man who is never seen by anyone except Lorsa Biscuita . The plot never looses the level of interest and always lavishes it scene by scene . In comes Rana Daggubati as Joki and Bipasha Basu as Joi . Both are in luv with each other but lovers dnt meet actually . Joi is handed in the jobs of Lorsa Biscuita and Joki  puts her out of his mind . Rana has displayed a very mature acting skills as Joki . He leaves other characters behind with his emotional parts. Songs like "Te Amo "and "Jeeyein Kyu " adds to the delight . Not only the lead actors , but the minor characters too play a significant role in the movie . Ek baar drugs ke khel me jo gale tak phans gaya , uska doobna tay hai . The movie revolves around the hunt for the mysterious man and marks up with a fantastic climax . There is a bit emotional segments in the climax which renders ones heart. 


Now talk about the cherry on the cake . Lots to talk about but nothing to speak . The Title Track - Mit Jaaye Ghum featuring The Metro - luv , gorgeous and indeed Super - Hot Deepika Padukone enthralls the spectators . Surely , the promos dont do justice to what the song is in this movie . Its an anti-climax song which just asks you to whistle and clap for the perfect and grooving dance moves she does. Bosco-Caeses are the man behind the choreography and needs to be applauded too. The movie picks up the fifth gear with this song . the soul song to be true. One can only say after the song ends - " Yaar , itne jaldi khatam ho gaya !" 
                                   The Video Of Official Trailor Of DMD :

Agar aapko theatre me film dekhne ka shauk hai toh kabhi bhi bhool se bhi DMD ko mat bhuliye . Arre ! bhool jao ghar ka TV aur CD , this movie is a Big Film . Jo majaa aapko theatre me aayega , woh majaa aur kahin nahi . The Digital Sound , the skillful acting , the refreshing cast , the loving and suiting musik and not to forget the blend of Mit jaaye Ghum - do not try this at home ! Movie me kaheen me bhi aap bore nahi honge kyuki ACP Kamath always comes up with his funny one-liners . They certainly adds to the special list . The climax is really touching as it has a turn-up . But the lenght of the movie looks a bit- stretched . Probably , 10 mins short the movie could have been . But thats not a big fault . Dum Maaro Dum - " Goa me aane ..." No wait ! 
Let me make it large -
India me aane ka , mast chill maarne ka lekin Dum , Dum bilkul nahi maarne ka . The movie highlights the adverse effects when one is trapped by the world of drugs and the small - small places of Goa have been shot with fine skill of cinematography .


Dum Maaro Dum and AB  deserves atleast 3 pure gold along with lots of silver and bronze biscuits . Dont miss such a Dumdaar and Masaledaar Movie . Do watch it aur haan , Dum maarne ka Zaroor for the movie !


Saturday, 23 April 2011

Untitled Story - A plan for forest camping - The Peligrar Espera !!


Ubel apni badi aur aag ugalti kursi pe aaraam kar raha hai . Tabhi Saabu uske paas aata hai  - " Huzoor ! hum kab tak aise hi khaali baithe rahenge ? " 
Ubel ke chehre pe hamesha ek krur hansi viraajmaan rehti hai jo dekhne me sirf darr paidaa karti hai . Uski uss hansi me na jaane kitna paap chhupa huwa hai -
 "  Shakti hi hoti hi sabse bada nasha ,
     insaano ke liye hai yeh ek keh-kasha ,
     Kitna bachega woh baccha ,
    Jhelega in sabko toh yeh phansa ." 
Ubel ki yeh gol-gol baatein sunke saabu thoda hairaan ho gaya - " Sarkar ! andhere ki kasam par hum kuch samajh nahi paaye . " 
" Samajh toh tumhe tab aayega jab main chahunga ki tum samjho . " 
Saabu yeh toh samajh gaya ki ubel ke shaitaani dimaag me kuch chal raha hai , par unse puchne ka woh himmat nahi kar sakta . 
Ubel khud hi sab kuch bataane ko taiyyar hai - " Murakh ! jab insaan ko pata lagta hai ki woh shaktishaali hai toh ghamand ke baadal usse gher lete hai . Shuruwaat acchi hai par anjaam hoga paapi . " 
Saabu khud ko rok nahi paaya aur puch hi liya - " Paap hi paap , karega raaj . Par sarkar , hume karna kya hai ? " 
Ubel ki woh krur hansi tham gayi , saabu ab darne laga . Kursi se aag ki lapte nikalni bhi bandh ho gayi . Aisa lagta hai jaise kursi ki aag aur ubel ki muskaan ek hi hai . Dono ki  chhaabi ek hi lohe se bani ho jaise . " Murakh ! humaare pehla mohra toh kaam kar hi raha hai par ab baari hai doosre ki . " 
Saabu samajh gaya ki ubel ne koi krur chaal chal di hai -  " Sarkar ! Kaun sa mohra ?  Aur phir aap toh jaante hai ki hum uss bacche ko nahi maar sakte , phir kyun ? " 
Aag nikalna phir se shuru aur ubel ki hansi waapis uske chehre pe - " Hum yeh jaante hai ki shakti hone ke wajah se hum uska kuch nahi bigaad sakte . Hum jaante hai ki hum tab tak be-asar hai jab tak uski 3 kadiyaan maujood hai . Taaqat ko aazmaana woh jaanta hai par kahaan tak aur kaise aazmaana hai , usse nahi pata . Hum bhi toh dekhein ki mogul , mogul ke laayak hai bhi ki nahi . Kaam me aayega tabhi toh kaam me laayenge . " Itna bolkar woh zor-zor se hasne laga . 


Waha hostel me sanchit aur vishnu baat kar rahe hai , camping ko leke - 


Dekho sanchit ! main jaanta hun ki hum sirf fun n masti ke liye jaa rahe hai par ek baat hai jo sahi nahi hai . 
" Kaun si baat ? " Sanchit ko yeh abhi nahi pata hai ki main jaanta hun ki usne orkut se jhooth bola hai ki hum jungle nahi mandir jaa rahe hai . 
Yehi ki hum kaha jaa rahe hai . 
" Kya bol rahe ho baba ji ? Clear bolna " 
Agar sanchit ko sab clear sunnaa hai toh - Hum mandir bhi jaayenge . 
" Mandir ? Kaun sa mandir ? " 
Wahi mandir jo humaare camping spot se 1 km pehle padta hai . Hum mandir bhi ho lete hai na yaar . Kya kehte ho ?
" Tumhe pata hai ki aarav ne orkut se kya bola tha ? " 
Poori recipee pata hai mujhe . Ab bolo , mandir bhi hona hai ki nahi ? 
" Abe yaar ! mandir is so boring yaar . " 
Boring hai par socho ! 
Tumne jhooth toh bola hai bhagwan ke naam par . Ab kaheen yeh jhooth ki wajah se humaare exams kharaab ho gaye toh ? Ab saap ko pakad hi liya hai toh zeher se toh bachna hi hoga na . 
" Par yaar mandir jaana kitna old-fashion hai ."
Jaanta hun par bhagwan ke naam par jhooth nahi chalta yaar . Ab padhai karke toh number aate nahi , ab shayad bhagwan ke aashirvaad se number mill jaaye . 
Sanchit sunke chaukk  gaya ki yeh line toh aarav ne office me boli thi - " Hey dude ! tune sab sun liya tha na ? Theek hai , hum pehle mandir jaayenge aur phir camping . Ab toh ok hai na ? " 
Bas ! sab changaa hai praa . 


Sanchit chala gaya aur main ab room me akela hun . 


Main bas kuch soch raha tha ki achanak mere saamne wohi remitente aa gayi . 
Aap ? Aap yahaan kaise ? Mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai ki main kya kahun . Yeh kyu aayi hai , kaheen kuch huwa toh nahi ? 
" Mujhe dekhke itne hairat me mat pado ." 
Dekhke hairat me mat pado ? Kaise na padu ? Aap aise achanak yahaan ? 
" Bas , aane waale khatrein se aagaah karne aayi hun ." 
Khatra ? Ab kaisa khatra hai mujhe ? 
" Nahi ! khatra tumhe nahi hai . " 
Phir ? Phir kise hai ? 
" Woh log jo tumhare aas-paas honge . Jahaan tum jaa rahe ho , woh jagah tumhaara intezaar kar rahi hai . Sambhalke rehna aur baakiyon ko bhi sambhaal lena . Aakhir tum ek Mogul ho , raksha karna tumhara kaam hai . " 
Mere aas-paas walo ko ? Matlab mere doston ko ? 
Main soch hi raha tha ki remitente meri nazron ke saamne se gaayab ho gayi . 
Aap kahaan gayi ? Hello ! aap hai ki gayi ? 
Phir se aadhe-adhoore baaton ko mere kaano me chodhke woh chali gayi . Par jitna usne bataya , utna kaafi hai . Iska matlab jungle me khatraa hai mere doston ko . Main unhe kuch nahi hone dunga . Main karunga unki raksha . Kuch nahi hone dunga main unhe . Dekhte hai kya intezaar kar raha hai mera jungle me ! 
Main uljhaa hi huwa tha ki achanak se Sanchit room me aa gaya - " Kiska intezaar kar raha hai dude ? Chal baahar gaadiyan ready hai , chalne ko . Aur sab mandir jaane ko bhi ready ho gaye hai . Ab chal . Bag utha apna ! " 

Friday, 22 April 2011

Untitled Story - A plan for forest camping - Allies Approval Granted !


Jaise - jaise samay beetne laga waise - waise soniya mere doston ke saath bhi ghul-mill gayi . Nishita aur soniya bhi saath time-spend karne lagi aur dono me koi ladaai yaa jhagdaa nahi hai . Aur inn sabko saath dekhke main sabse jyada khush hun . Ab baari hai Sanchit aur Aarav ki , hume khush karne ke liye . Dono orkut se raza-mandi toh paa chuke hai par ab hum sabko kaise manaayenge. Sabse pehle mera number hai kyuki unhe yeh pata hai ki agar main haan kardu toh baaki ke log bhi jyada nahi sochenge . Akal - mand hai dono , akhir dost kiske hai ! 


" Vishnu ! dekh orkut bhi raaji ho gaya hai ab . Humne pata liya usko , ab toh chal na . "  Aarav jaise andar bol raha tha waise hi woh mere saamne bol raha hai . Sanchit jaise andar chup kar ke tha waise woh mere saamne bhi chup khada hai . 
Haan ! mujhe pata tha ki tum orkut ko confess kar loge . Kaise manaaya waise ? Main jaanta hun ki aarav ne kya paath padhaaya hai andar par baaki nahi jaante aur dono sochte hai ki main bhi nahi jaanta . 
" Hum andar gaye  , bola ki ...ki .... hume baahar ghumne jaana hai ...aur....aur....thoda sa jhooth bola ...aur....aur....orkut maan gaya . "  Aarav baatein banaane me hamesha aage rehta hai . Par jaise woh bol raha hai , waise koi bhi ajeebo-gareeb shaktiyon se lipt insaan samajh sakta tha ki woh jhooth bol raha hai . Par mere alaawa aisa koi nahi hai . 
Tab se leke ab sanchit ne apni chuppi todi - " Yaar ! ab yeh sab baatein chodho . Pehle bataao chalna hai na ab ? " 
Sanchit ko sunke aarav bhi seedha point pe aaya - " Haan ! final karo ab , kal chalna hai ki nahi ? " 
Main na kaise kar sakta hun guys ? Aakhir tum dono ne itne sacchaayi se orkut se permission jo lee hai . Main chalunga . Baaki ko bhi padha do paath .


Bas iske baad kya hona tha , dono ne sabko ghuma diya . Ek hi line ek din me 6 baar . 
Mere baad Raju ke paas gaya aarav - " Dekh raju ! yeh exams toh hote rahenge , par abhi jo plan bana hai woh doobara nahi banega . " Raju ko koi idea nahi hai ki aarav kya keh raha hai - " Kaisa plan ? Exams boycott karne ka kya ? Main tumhare saath hun be ? "  Yeh toh exam chodhne ke liye taiyyar ho gaya . " Abe nahi ! camping pe jaane ka plan . 7 kms from our college . Soch ....." 


Yehi baat aur yehi soch leke aarav priya ke paas gaya - " Soch ..... kitna majaa aayega ! Main , tum aur tum , main . Jungle me ...raat me.....thand ....chaand.....romantic mausam ...." Priya toh aarav ki baatein sunte hi kho gayi par - " Par wahaa aur bhi toh honge . Humaare alaawa baaki sab bhi toh honge . " Aarav ki baat kate usse pehle usne phir priya ko ghuma diya - " Nahi priya ! jungle me outing ka majaa hi kuch alag hai . Aur asli majaa toh sabke saath hai na . Ready ho ki nahi ? Final time puch raha hun bolo ! " Priya jyada sochti nahi kyuki aakhir woh hai toh ek ladki hi na  - " Haan ! main ready hun par hum jaayenge kaise ? " Yeh sawaal bilkul sahi baithta hai par jawaab aarav ke paas hai - " Kaise ? Soch ...." 


Yehi sawaal ka jawaab aur yehi soch leke sanchit gaya simmy ke paas - " Soch simmy !....tumhare paas vijay malliya toh nahi hai par main hun na - Sanchit Walliya. " Simmy ko jab tak har baat khul ke nahi samjhaayi jaati woh samajhti nahi kyuki woh hai toh ek ladki hi na - " Main samjhi nahi . Walliya toh tum ho par hum jaayenge kaise ? " 
Ab kheer ko phailaane ka waqt aa gaya , samasya ka hal sanchit ko hi dena hai - " Mere paas paise hai kuch , matlab mere dad ke . Unki do mahindra bolero hai , un dono sawaari me thodi jagah hai jiss jagah me hum sab aa jaayenge . Ab toh samajh gayi na ? " Ab toh koi murdaa insaan bhi samajh jaata aur bhagwan ka shukar hai ki simmy usse behtar nikli  - " Samajh gayi main , par hum kab jaa rahe hai ? "  Ladkiyaan aisi kyun hoti hai ? Matlab har baat par sawaal hota hai inke paas . Par sanchit ko jawaab dena hi hai - " Soch ...." 


Yehi aakhiri soch leke dono ne mujhe soniya ke paas bheja . Sab jaante hai ki soniya sabko naa bhale hi keh de par mujhe kabhi nahi . Ab meri baari hai soniya se baat karne ki - " Socho mat soniya ! sab kuch plan ho chuka hai . Sanchit ki do cars hai , aarav ki girlfriend hai , mere kuch friends hai aur tum ho . " 
" Par vishnu , exams ek week next hai ." 
Yeh huwi na baat . Aakhir kuch ladkiyaan hoti hai jinke paas dimaag bhi hota hai . Jo sawaal soniya ne pucha hai , woh bilkul sahi hai . Exams ek week baad hai na , hum to kal jaa rahe hai . Bas tum na mat kehna . Dekho ! agar tum nahi chalogi toh tum jaanti ho mujhe waha accha nahi lagega . 
" Main tumhe kaise akele jaane dungi . Jab se aayi hun , tumhaare saath ek baar bhi ghumne nahi gayi hun . Main chalungi . Yeh mauka kaise jaane de sakti hun main " 
Aur bas thoda sa emotional  kya kar diya , soniya maan gayi . Thank you soniya ! Mujhe pata tha ki tum mujhe naa nahi karogi . 
" Tumhe meri har haan pe haq hai vishnu " 


7 logon ne haami bhar di . Par koi ek hai jo abhi bhi iss plan se bacha huwa hai . Sab ne haan kar di par  abhi Nishita ki haan baaki hai . Soniya ke aane ke baad bahut kam hi baar haste huwe dekha hai kisi ne usse . Uski toh jaise duniya hi suni pad gayi ho . Aise mauke par uska haan kehna bahut mushkil hai par phir mera kaam liya gaya . Nahi , baat karne main nahi gaya , gaya toh sanchit uske paas - " Nishita ! toh tum kal chal rahi ho na ? " 
Nishita ab pehle jaise nahi milti , chehre pe udaasi ke baadal chaye rehte hai , hothon pe sirf gham aur aankhon me nami  - " Kal ? Main kya karungi chalke ? " 
Jaisa socha tha waise hi paaya . Nishita ka koi interest nahi dikha . Par hum sabhi pakke dost hai , humaari khushi jab tak saath me nahi share hoti , khushi khushi nahi hoti . Jaana toh sabko hai , warna koi nahi jaayega . 
Sanchit ko nishita ko manaana aata hai - " Dekho nishita ! ek baar chal ke toh dekho . You will feel better aur waise bhi bahut dino se tum muskuraayi nahi ho . Shayad thoda baahar ghumne-phirne se tumhe accha lage . Try it once ! " 
Nishita ab bhi jaana nahi chahti hai - " Accha toh lagta hai mujhe , Pehle bhi aur aaj bhi . Tum log enjoy karo , main nahi aaungi . Please ! mujhe force mat karo . Exams hai , exams se pehle kabhi nahi ." 
Nishita ne exams ka bahaana banaaya par sabko pata hai ki wajah exams nahi main hun . Woh jaanti hai ki soniya bhi aa rahi hai aur vishnu-soniya ek saath usse sirf dukh hi pahuncha sakte hai . Woh yeh sab bardaasht nahi kar sakti . Bahut jhel rahi hai aur nahi jhel sakti . 
" Nishita ! main jaanta hun ki wajah kya hai ? Kyu tum aise despair si ho gayi ho ? Par kab tak aise rahogi tum ? Life ko ek aur mauka do , shayad life badal jaaye . Please nishita ! ab na mat kaho . Tum nahi chalogi toh hum sab chah ke bhi happilly nahi jaa paayenge . So please ! please ! " 
Koi aur bhi hai jo yeh baatein sun raha hai aur mauke ka faayda uthaane baahar aa gaya , Priya - " Wao nishi ! dekho ! hum sab chahte hai ki tum chalo . Waha pe vishnu bhi hoga . Shayad tumhe usse baat karne ka mauka mill jaaye . Hope for the best na . " 
Nishita jaan chuki hai ki ab baat karne se kuch nahi hone wala . Woh soniya se bhi jaan chuki hai aur vishnu toh sab kuch saamne hi hai - " Ab kya baat karungi vishnu se ? Aur waise bhi woh jab bhi mere saamne aata hai toh mujhe khud pe taras aata hai . Taras aata hai apne pyaar pe . Hamesha se bhagwan ne mujhse har woh cheej chheeni hai jisse mujhe pyaar huwa . Aur iss baar bhi bhagwan ne yehi kiya . Guys ! main nahi aaungi . " Itna kehke woh kamre se baahar chali gayi . Sab maan gaye par nishita nahi maani . Sanchit bhi maayus ho gaya - " Priya ! ab nishi ko kaun manaayega ? " Yeh sawaal ka jawaab sabke paas hai . 


Raat ke 12 baj rahe hai . Har raat ki tarah saari battiyan bujh chuki hai . Aarav aur maine ek plan banaya hai . Plan hai nishita ko manaane ka . Pehli baar nishita mujhse milne aise hi aayi thi , raat ke sannate me . Sabki nazron se bachke , mere room tak . Ab shayad nishita ko manaane ke liye mujhe bhi yehi karna hoga . Aarav ! tum sure ho na ki hume koi dekhega nahi ? Main thoda sa ghabraaya hun par jaanta hun ki main bach jaaunga , bas aarav na phanse . 
" Aarav ka plan kabhi fail huwa hai kya kabhi ? " 
Nahi , kabhi nahi aur main jaanta hun ki aaj bhi nahi hoga . Ek baat toh hume pata hai ki agar hume kisi ne pakad liya aise toh hum seedhe jaayenge orkut ke paas aur aage ka anjaam kuch bhi ho sakta hai . Par abhi itna kuch nahi sochna hai , abhi toh mission nishita . Iss mission ka priya aur simmy ko bhi khabar hai , sirf nishita nahi jaanti . Jaise-taise hum girls hostel ke zameen par kadam rakh diye . Room ke baahar priya aur simmy humara intezaar kar rahi hai . 
Hey ! tum dono baahar kyu khadi ho ? Tumhe toh andar hona chayiye tha ? 
Dono ke paas ek hi jawaab hai - " Humse ek galti ho gayi . Nishi ko sab pata chal gaya hai aur woh darwaaza nahi khol rahi hai . Hum chilla bhi nahi sakte kyuki agar hum chillaayenge toh baaki ke log jaag jaayenge . " 
Ab kya karna hai ? 
" Ab tum hi kuch kar sakte ho vishnu ! " Sab meri taraf ek hope se dekh rahe hai , nishita sirf meri baat sunegi aur maanegi . 
Ab andar toh jaa nahi sakte , darwaaje se hi fariyaad lagaani hogi . 
Nishita ! darwaaja kholo . Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai . Hum jaante hai ki tum hume sun rahi ho . 
Ab hum chaaron uske jawaab ka wait karne lage . Socha ki woh turant darwaaza kholegi par na woh boli aur na woh darwaaza kholi . Main dekh sakta hun ki nishita bilkul darwaaze se satke khadi hai . Uska mann toh hai baahar aane ka par apne gusse ki aadh me woh apne pyaar ko chupa rahi hai . Jo main dekh sakta hun , wo baaki teen nahi dekh sakte . 
Nishita ! main jaanta hun ki darwaaje pe hi khadi ho so please darwaaja kholo . 
Uske kaano me meri aawaaz jaa toh rahi hai par koi asar nahi kar pa rahi . Shayad thoda sa emotional karne se maan jaaye . 
Ok ! tum wahi khadi raho . Darwaaja bhi mat kholo par sirf ek baat sun lo . 
Woh apni jagah se hili toh . Ab darwaaje se kaan lagaake woh taiyyar ho gayi sunne ko . Ab woh maan jaayegi . 
Toh kal tumhe aana hi hoga , samjhi . Koi bahaana nahi chalega . 
Woh abhi bhi kaano ko darwaaze se lagaaye khadi hai . Uske aankhon me aansuun hai par woh bhi sookh chuke hai . 
Hum sab jaa rahe hai  aur agar tum nahi chalogi toh koi majaa nahi yaar . 
Abhi bhi same reaction but no action . 
Sanchit ki bolero taiyyar hai , orkut ne permission de di hai . So tum haddi mat bano please . 
Andar koi dekh nahi sakta par meri baat sunke woh thoda sa muskuraayi . Lekin wo darwaaza nahi kholne waali abhi.
Dekho tum bhi aise hi aayi thi mujhse milne mere room tak . Aaj main aaya hun tumhe manaane . Chalo na yaar , sab enjoy karenge . Jungle ko na mat karo , waise bhi itne kam jungle bache hai bhaarat me . 
Meri baatein aarav aur dono ladkiyon ko bahut stupid lag rahi hai , woh soch rahe hai ki main nahi kar paaunga par andar meri baato ka khoob asar ho raha hai . Ab jyada time nahi lagega . Par aarav mujhe disturb karne laga - " Abe ! kya bakwaas bakta jaa raha hai tu ? " 
Pehle aarav se nipat leta hun - Ek second , main baat kar raha hun na . Ab waapis nishita - Accha ab bhi chipps khaa rahi ho ki chodh di ? Waise abhi mat batao , kal batana . Abhi bas yeh batado ki kal chal rahi ho na ? 
Nishita haan karna chaahti hai par soch me hai ki kaise kahun . Toh maine socha ki yeh mushkil bhi hal kar du . 
Agar tumhaari haan hai toh darwaaja khol do . Phir hum chale jaayenge aur kal aayenge tumhe lene . Ok ? 
Nishita ke aansuuon ko kinaara mill gaya . Uske chehre pe phir se woh meethi si hansi aa gayi . Apne behte huwe tears ko usne pocha aur dheere-dheere darwaaza khol diya . Issi ke saath sabhi ke chehre pe smile aa gayi . 
Now that's like my good girl . Ab kal milte hai . Bye ! 


So , mission completed and list too. Ab hogi baari camping in forest ki .    

Untitled Story - A plan for forest camping - Permission from orkut !


Suna toh hai ki jab sar pe exams ka bhoot aa jaaye toh mandir se acchi jagah aur kuch nahi hoti hai . Bhagwan sabse acche tabhi lagte hai jab humpar exams taandav karte hai . Hum har din kitna bhi mauj kar le magar jab exams paas aate hai toh sabki watt lag jaati hai .Class me jab aliens banke baithte hai tab yeh khayaal nahi aata hai ki exam me kya likhenge aur jab exam aa jaate hai tab sochte hai ki kash class me dhyaan diye hote. Humaare bhi internals ek hafte baad shuru honge , sab ke sab pareshaan hai aur bechain hai . Lekin college ke ek ore kuch aise bhi log hai jo shuru hone se pehle kuch majaa karna chahte hai . Sanchit aur Aarav ka plan hai ki exam shuru hone se pehle hum ek chote se forest camping pe jaaye. Abhi dono gaye hai orkut ke paas , baahar jaane ki permission lene . Waise humne bhi haan isiliye kahi hai kyuki hume pata hai orkut kisi bhi haal me permission nahi denge . Exam se pehle outing kabhi nahi . Cricket ke history me bhi aisa nahi huwa hoga ki world cup se pehle ipl .


" Haan toh players ! tum log ek trip pe jaana chahte ho ? Am I right ? " 
Jawaab dene me hamesha ki tarah Aarav aage - " Haan sir ! hum aur humaare kuch dost mandir jaana chahte hai ."
" Mandir ? " Sun ke toh orkut bhi hairaan ho gaye .
" Haan sir ! exams ke pehle hum bhagwan ke darshan karna chahte hai isiliye ." 
Sanchit waise toh bahut bolta rehta hai par orkut ke saamne uski hawa nikal jaati hai . Saara daarom-daar Aarav ke upar hai ab . 
" Par mandir toh tumhare hostel me bhi hai , waha hi bhent kar lo ." 
" Sir hum jaante hai par jahaa hum jaana chahte hai woh bahut jaagta huwa mandir hai ."
" You mean jaagruk ?"
" Haan sir ! same to same ." 
Sanchit ko dekhte hi dekhte pasine aane lage . Aarav bhi dara huwa hai par sab usse hi sambhaalna hai . 
Aas-paas ki cheeje dekh ke toh waise hi kisi horror film ka feel aata hai orkut ke office me , yaa phir bole ki orkut ke dressing room me . 
Deewar pe saari dark shades me sachin ki badi-badi tasveerein . Jahaa jagah bach gayi waha pe dark pink colour aur unke upar orkut ki tasveerein , jo sabse jyada bhayanak hai . Unki har tasveer me alag - alag chehre ke bhaav . Saare bhaav aise jinhe dekhke toh koi bade se bada bhoot bhi pishaab karde. Unke office me aake lagta hai jaise kisi stadium ke dug-out me aa gaye hai . Bas kami hai Indian Cricket Team ke Players ki . Sachin orkut ke favourite player hai aur unke liye unke pehle baap. 
" I get you now . Jaise sachin apne match se pehle Sai baba ke darshan karta hai waise tum log bhi mandir jaake apne exam se pehle bhagwan ke darshan karna chahte ho . "
Ab dono thoda relax ho gaye . Aarav bola - " Haan sir ! same to same ."
" Ok ! tumhare paas ek din hai . Jao jaake aashirvaad lelo . Waise bhi padhai karke toh number aate nahi , ab shayad bhagwan ke aashirvaad se thode number mill jaaye . " 
" Thank you sir ! Thank you ! " 
Phir dono hi openers apni innings khel ke waapis aa gaye . Khushi hai unhe kyuki dono ne 100 run ki partnership jo kar li ab .  

Tuesday, 19 April 2011

Untitled Story : An Sundown in EUE - Double Tring Tring !


Haan sir ! mera phone aaya hai kya ? Counter pe hamesha ek insaan sota huwa paaya jaata hai . Woh insaan humare hostel ka common wardon hai - Sir Kumbhi . Bhagwan ne inka naam bahut soch - samajh ke rakha hai , kumbhkaran sirf sone me vishwaas rakhta tha aur Sir Kumbhi bhi  sirf sote hi rehte hai . Sir har baar ki tarah neend me hai . Hello ! sir main phone le loon ? 
" Ahh ! haan tumhara hai , uthao . " 
Dekhte hai ki phone har baar ki tarah ghar se hai yaa . Hello ! kaun ? 
Receiver ko apne kaan me lagaya toh pata chala ki phone ghar se hi hai , mummy ka hai . 
" Vishnu ! mummy bol rahi hun . Kaiso ho beta  ?" 
Haan , jaise the waise hai . Aaj phone kyu kiya mummy ? 
" Woh tumhari chuttiyon ke baare me pata chala na toh isiliye puchna tha ki aa rahe ho ki nahi . " 
Main phone pe baat kar raha hun aur sabki nazron se bachte woh 3 deviyan mere room tak jaa rahi hai . Un teeno ne mujhe dekha nahi kyuki woh bhi yeh chahti hai ki unhe koi dekhe nahi . Sir Kumbhi neend me hai isiliye unhe kuch dikh nahi raha . 
" Bolo beta ! iss baar chutti me aa rahe ho na ? " 
Arre ! chutti ke pehle exam bhi toh hai . Exam me kayi din baaki hai , uske baad chutti ka sochenge . 
" Exam kab hai ? " 
Abhi kuch dino me internals hai . Ek hafte chalega , phir 10 din ki chutti hogi . 
" Toh un 10 dino me ghar aa jaana iss baar . Pichle baar tum aaye nahi the diwali me aur yahaa kisi ne diwali nahi manaayi . " 
Arre ! toh pichle baar diwali me nahi aaye . Iss baar toh koi tyohaar nahi hai , phir kyu aaye ? 
Meri baaatein Kumbhi ke kaamo me ghoos toh rahi hai kyuki meri har baat pe woh apna jhulta huwa sar aur jhula rahe hai . 
" Dekho ! pata hai tumhara hum logon se milne ka mann nahi karta par iss baar aa jaana beta . Papa bhi tumko yaad karte hai . " 
Accha theek hai ab chutti ka exam ke baad dekha jaayega . Ab phone rakh rahe hai . 
" Accha rakho ! papa abhi office me hai warna woh bhi baat karte . Dekho iss baar zaroor aana aur apne dost me se kisi ko le aana . " 
Ab yeh kya hai mummy ? Mummy ka yeh sawaal alag hai . Ab hostel ka kaun sa dost mere ghar gorakhpur me aayega ? Baat aage badhane ka ek bahana chayiye mummy ko aur kuch nahi . Woh sochti hai ki agar mera koi dost saath aana chahega toh main zaroor ghar aaunga . 
" Le aana na . Bahut dost bane hai tumhare waha , hum bhi toh dekhe kaise dost hai tumhare . Koshish karna agar tumhara koi dost aana chahe toh . " 
Theek hai puch lenge , par mujhe pata hai ki koi nahi aayega . Ab rakhta hun . 
" Theek hai vishnu . Apna khayaal rakhna . Accha ! tumne khaana toh kha liya na ? Pet - vet sahi hai na ? " 
Haan ! khaana yahaan jaldi khila diya jaata hai . Sab theek hai . 
" Ab kaisa lag raha hai ? Ghar pe toh jab mann karta tha khaana maang lete the , par hostel me toh mummy hai nahi . " 
Jab zaroorat padti hai toh aadmi sab seekh jaata hai . Hum bhi seekh liye hai . Ab rakhogi ? 
" Accha theek hai , an jaake so jao . Aur chutti me aana zaroor . Rakhti hun beta . Apna khayaal rakhna babu . " 
Mummy aur kuch bolti isse pehle maine phone rakh diya . Lagta hai iss baar chutti me ghar jaana hi padega . Duniya ki sabhi mummy emotional blackmail bahut acchi tarah se jaanti hai . 


Vishnu ke room me , Aarav aur raju baat kar rahe hai . Thodi der me teeno ladkiyan bhi pahuch jaati hai -


Aarav aur Raju abhi bhi soniya ke baare me hi baat kar rahe hai . Main unke aas-paas nahi toh wo thoda khul ke baat kar rahe hai . " Aarav ! vishnu aur soniya itne poorane saathi niklenge kabhi socha na tha .  " Raju ki hamesha se aadat rahi hai ki woh baat seedhe karta hai , ghumaana usne kabhi seekha nahi . 
" Ab jo bhi hai , main toh khush hun ki vishnu ko soniya mill gayi . Usne mujhe bataya tha ki woh school time se ek ladki se pyaar karta hai . Par dekho bhagwan ne unhe mila diya aakhir me . " 
" Haan ! dekha tha na soniya giri toh kaise vishnu ke baahon me giri . Poore college me sirf  wahi ek jagah milli usse girne ke liye . " 
Aarav humare side se bol raha hai - " Jab do log pyaar me hote hai na toh woh kabhi - na - kabhi mill hi jaate hai . Bhagwan bhi unhe door nahi rakh paata . Waise scene bahut romantic tha na , saara college saamne , prom night ki taiyyaari  , Soniya seedhi pe se giri aur vishnu tujhe dhakel kar usse bachata hai , phir dono ek-doosre ke aankhon me kho jaate hai . How romantic ! " 
In dono ki baato ko full-stop lagane pahunchi - Nishita , Priya aur Simmy . Dono ladke inhe iss time dekhke thoda chaukk  gaye . Priya seedhe boli -  "Vishnu kaha hai ? Nishita ko usse kuch baat karni hai . " 
Aarav - " Priya , tum log abhi yahaan kaise pahunchi ? " Waise aarav jyada bhauchakka ho gaya unhe dekhke . 
" Jaldi batao vishnu kaha hai ? " 
" Priya ! tum log yahaan se niklo . Agar kisi ne dekh liya toh badi gadbad ho jaayegi . Paagal ho kya ? " 
Ab nishita saamne aaker boli - " Dekho aarav ! mere paas jyada time nahi hai , vishnu ko bulaao . " 
" Vishnu toh gaya hai counter pe , uske ghar se phone aaya hai . " 
Priya aur Simmy nishita ke kaano me kuch kehte hai . Kya bolte hai yeh dono ladko ko sunaayi nahi diya . Raju toh jaise chup hi ho gaya hai par aarav ko darr hai ki kaheen koi dekh na le unhe aise - " Kya huwa ? Ab toh jao , subah mill lena . Class ke time . yeh sahi samay nahi hai , samjha karo please ! " 
Nishita - " Nahi ! aaj vishnu se baat karke hi jaaungi main . Main ab ruk nahi sakti . " 
Shayad raju ko ab samajh aaya ki usse kya bolna hai - " To tum log kuch jaanlo pehle . Vishnu abhi aata hoga par shayad tum log kuch jaanna chahogi ? " 


In sabki baaton se seedhe counter pe waapis . Sir ! ho gayi baat , ab chalte hai . " Jao par seedha room me jaana . Meri nazar tum par hi hai . "  Bolne ke liye toh Kumbhi ki nazar sab par hai par woh nazrein band hai . Theek hai Sir . Main mudke apne room me jaane ke liye badhne laga . Phone ki ghanti phir baji . Ab lagta hai phir kisi ki maa ka phone aa gaya . " Haan ! haan hai . Ek minute hold pe raho , bulate hai . " Ab phir SMS ko bulaawa jaayega aur phir koi ladka phone ko kaano se sataayega . Mera toh kota poora ho gaya hai . " Ae vishnu ! tumhara phone hai . " Sir chillake mujhe rokte hai . Main socha ki phir mummy hi hogi , zaroor kuch bolna bhool gayi hongi isiliye phir se phone kiya hai . Main waapis counter ki taraf mudaa aur phone ki taraf badhne laga . " Kamaal hai ! aaj bahut yaad aa rahi hai logon ko tumhari ." Kumbhi ki baat se lag raha hai ki woh mera majaak udaa rahe hai . Unki madhdham si muskaan mujhe alag hi sanket de rahi hai . Maine bhi return me ek  smile di unhe aur receiver ko phir se apne kaan me lagaya. Hello ! kaun hai ? 
" Pehchaan kaun ? " 
Aawaaz jaani-pehchaani hai par theek se pata nahi chal raha ki kiski hai . Iss baar bhi ek female hi hai par yeh meri mummy nahi . Nahi sorry ! main pehchaan nahi paa raha . Aap kaun  ?
" Mujhe laga ki tum pehli hi baar me meri aawaaz pehchaan loge . " 
Waise maine usse kabhi phone pe baat nahi kee hai par phone pe shayad soniya ki aawaaz aisi hi hogi . Kaheen yeh soniya toh nahi . Maine socha ki turant naam leke suspense tod dun par mere saamne Kumbhi baithe huwe hai . Jhijhak ho rahi hai unke saamne naam lene me . Pehle phone pe bola - Aap ek minute hold kariye please . Phir Kumbhi ko dekha - Sir ! aap thoda side ho jaayenge ? Kuch khaas baat hai please ! " Arre ! samajhte hai hum khaas baat . " Itna kehkar woh waha se uthke jaane lage par jaate - jaate " Aaj kal ke launde , college aaye nahi ki masti maarna shuru . Kya padhenge aise ladke ! " aur woh kinaare chal diye . Ab baari hai waapis phone ki . 
Hello ! nahi aapki aawaaz hum pehchaan gaye . 
" Accha  ! to batao kaun hai hum ? " 
Mujhe pata hai jaise main kisi aur ladki ka naam lunga soniya jhatt se apna naam bata degi . Ladkiyaan bahut emotional hoti hai aur jisse pyaar karti hai uske muuh se kisi aur ladki ka naam sunna bardaasht nahi kar sakti toh maine bhi bol diya - Tum Anshika ho na  ? Main kaise tumhe nahi pehchaanunga yaar ! 
" OMGee  ! yeh anshika kaun hai vishnu ? Tumne kabhi kisi anshika ka zikar nahi kiya mere se . " 
Ohh ! toh possesive ho rahi ho tum ! 
" Tumhare case me hona zaroori hai . "
Zaroor par uski koi zaroorat nahi . Main sirf soniya ka hun aur kisi ka nahi . 
" Shit ! tumne toh mera prank hi pakad liya . Jab tumhe pata tha ki main soniya hun toh kisi aur ka naam kyu liya ? "
Bas ! dekhna chahta tha ki tum kab tak chup rehti ho . 
" Abhi tak poorane dialogues yaad hai tumhe ? Good ! " 
Mujhe sab yaad hai . Tumhe kya yaad hai , dekhte hai . 
" Mujhe tumhare alaawa aur kuch nahi yaad hai . " 
Hmm ! yeh dialogue jyada accha hai waise . 
" Kya kar rahe the mere phone se pehle ? " 
Anshika se baat kar rahe the . Humari baaton me thodi si shararat bhi hai , thodi si khushi bhi hai aur thoda sa pyaar bhi hai . Hum 2 saal baad itna khul ke baat kar rahe hai , itna kuch hai kehne - sunne ko ki saari raat kam pad jaaye . 
" Bh ! sacchi batao na kya kar rahe the ? " 
Bahut hi maasun si aawaaz me soniya ne pucha toh main kaise sahi jawaab na deta - Woh tumse pehle mummy ka phone aaya tha . Bas jaa raha tha ki tumhara phone aa gaya .   
" Mummy ka phone kyu aaya tha ? Kuch chayiye ye koi kaam hai toh mujhe bolo . " 
Nahi koi kaam nahi tha . Woh toh bas chutti me waapis aane ko keh rahi thi isiliye phone aaya tha . 
" Ek baat bataau ? " 
Haan haan batao .
" I miss you so very much . Ek-ek pal jaise saalon sa lagta hai ab . " 
Accha ? Ab lagta hai aur pehle ? 
" Sirf ab kyuki pehle tumne i love you thode hi bola tha . Bola toh ab hai na . " 
Ok ! lekin main tumhe har pal yaad karta tha . Kaheen bhi rahu , kuch bhi karu , sirf tumhari hi yaad aati thi . Par ab nahi . 
" Oh ! ab kyu nahi aati ? " 
Arre ! ab tumhe i love you jo bol diya hai . Pehle kahaa bola tha . 
" How mean ! Pehle to tum aise nahi bolte the , ab yeh sudden change kaha se aa gaya ? " 
Bola toh pehle i love you nahi kaha tha par ab keh diya . So khul ke bol raha hun . 
" Accha toh khul ke bol rahe ho ? Nice ! mujhe tum aise bhi pasand ho but . " 
Mujhe bhi main har tarah se pasand hun aur tum bhi . Ek taraf mera dimaag aur dill soniya ke saath hai toh ek taraf meri nazar Kumbhi pe hai . Main bas intezaar kar raha hun ki kab Kumbhi ke sabr ka baandh toot jaaye . Aisa hote hi main phone rakh deta warna Kumbhi mujhe koi kumbh me phenk deta . 
" Vishnu ! yaad hai tumhe jab main tumse naaraj ho gayi thi aur 3 din tumse baat nahi ki thi  ? " 
Haan ! mujhe sab yaad hai . 
" Aur ussi beech jab tum Amrit se baat karne lage the  mere saamne toh mujhe bahut gussa aata tha . Mann toh karta tha ki amrit ka muuh tod dun . " 
Jealousy haan ? 
" Jo bhi ho . Mitali yaad hai tumhe ? " 
Kaun mitali ? Wahi na jo mere bagal waale row me baithti thi ? 
Dheere-dheere soniya poorani saari baatein yaad kar rahi hai aur mere saath baant rahi hai . Kuch baatein hamesha dill me rehti hai , kuch aisi baatein . 
" Haan wahi mitali . Jab ek din tum uske saath pencil share kar rahe the history period me . Pehle tum book me underline karte aur phir woh tumse pencil leke apni book me underline karti . Apni pencil toh laati nahi thi aur tumhari pencil leke tumpe line maarti thi . " 
Nahi yaar ! aisa kuch nahi tha . Wo bas line kheechne ke liye pencil maang rahi thi . 
" Mera toh mann karta tha ki pencil leke uske muuh me ghusa dun  par school ki wajah se control karti thi . " 
Ab itni saari feelings control karogi toh mujhe pata kaise chalega ki tumhare mann me kya chal raha hai ? 
" Sab kuch bol dungi toh tumhara toh saara kaam asaan ho jaayega na . Waise tumhe neend toh nahi na aa rahi hai ? " 
Neend ki baat huwi toh ek  nazar phir Kumbhi pe gayi . Woh abhi bhi deewar ka tek liye khade hai . 
Nahi ab toh der tak jaagne ki aadat ho gayi hai . Aur tumhe ? 
" Mujhe bhi neend nahi aati itne jaldi . Kya karu saara time toh aap mujhe sataate rehte ho " 
Oh ! sorry for that but mujhe aur koi kaam bhi toh nahi . 
Humaari baat kabhi khatam nahi hogi . Kumbhi bhi ubb chuke hai khade-khade . 
" Arre ! kya ISD call hai kya  ?" Akhir Unhone chillaker hume disturb kar hi diya . 
Pehle soniya - Hello ! ek minute . Phir Kumbhi - Bas sir ! thodi der aur . 
Sar hilaate huwe sir phir waise hi khade ho gaye . 
Accha soniya ab mujhe phone rakhna hoga . Wo wardon sir gussa kar rahe hai . 
" Ohh No ! itne jaldi ? Main kya karoongi phir ? " 
Ek ghante se upar ho chuke hai baba. Kya karogi ? Soo jao aur kya . 
" Abhi toh bahut saari baatein karni thi yaar. "
Kal college me milte hai na . 
" Kal aane me toh bahut time baaki hai . Ok ! theek hai , tum ab jaao warna wardon tumhe kuch ulta-seedha bol dega . " 
Suno ! apna khayaal rakhna . 
"  Mera khayaal rakhne ke liye tum ho na . Main apna nahi tumhara khayaal rakhne aayi hun . "
Dekho ! life me 3 cheejo ka hamesha khayaal rakhna chayiye .
" Kaun si 3 cheeje ? " 
I , me aur myself . 
" Ohhhh ! nice thought . Accha ab tum jaao . Bye !" 
Wardon sir waapis aane lage. Ok bye !
" Miss you n Love you " 
Me too soniya ! 
" Nahi poora bolo " 
Kumbhi mere peeche hi khade hai , unke saamne mujhe kuch bhi bolne me sharam aa rahi hai . Toh maine sirf byee bola aur phone rakh diya .
Isiliye hum dono class me hamesha pakde jaate the kyuki humaari baaton ka kabhi koi ant nahi hota hai . Waise jab main room me pahucha toh sab jaa chuke the aur sirf aarav tha jo apne bed pe soo raha tha . 
Wardon Kumbhi bhi mujhe bolte huwe gaye -  " Ek saal bhi nahi huwa tumhe aur lambe - lambe call aane lage . Bahut sahi jaa rahe ho beta !  "

Monday, 18 April 2011

Untitled Story - An Sundown in EUE part 1 :


 Ab college bahut badla-badla sa ho gaya . Ek taraf vishnu aur uska pyaar aur ek taraf nishita aur vishnu ke liye uska pyaar. Soniya ke aane ke baad poore college me sirf do hi baat hone lagi - ek Vishu aur Soniya ki prem-kahani aur doosri paas aata internal exam . Ek taraf darde-dill aur ek taraf sirf sar-dard. Sabhi students ko bolte suna jaaye toh lagega ki sirf do hi cheeje hai college me - ek vishnu-soniya aur doosra internal exams. Hostel ke ek ore ka haal dekhne laayak hai , matlab sunne laayak hai . " Vishnu ! kya chakkar hai boss tera ? Abhi woh ladki ko aaye do din hi huwe hai aur tum dono ne propose tak kar diya ek - doosre ko . " Vishnu aur sabhi ladke shaam ke naye topic ko discuss kar rahe hai . Aarav ka sawaal to zaayas hai , kyuki kisi ko nahi pata ki vishnu aur soniya 2 saal baad mile hai . Main isiliye kuch bol nahi raha kyuki mujhe pata hai ki yeh sawaal aakhiri nahi , aage aur bhi sawaal sunlu phir sabka ek hi me jawaab de dunga . " Ke bhaya ? Kuch toh bol , soniya ka kya chakkar hai ? Tu usko pehle se toh nahi na jaanta tha  ? "  Pehle socha ki kuch boloon par phir usse jyada sahi laga ki apna wallet kholun aur woh tasveer sabko dikhaaun. Guys ! aur aage kuch bhi bolne se pehle yeh dekhlo . Maine woh tasveer Aarav ke haathon me thamaa dee. Woh tasveer soniya ki hai , ab shayad sabko kuch samajh aa jaaye. " Yeh toh soniya ki tasveer lag rahi hai be . Par yeh toh bahut poorani lag rahi hai , iska matlab ki ...." Aarav jaanta tha ki mere past me koi thi par woh yeh nahi jaanta tha ki woh koi , soniya hai  . Haan ! yaar wo koi , soniya hi hai . " Ab samajh aaya ki tune kabir ki naak kyu todi . " Nahi yaar , aisi baat nahi hai . Wo soniya ko pareshaan kar raha tha isiliye gussa aa gaya aur main khud ko control nahi kar paaya. " Tujhe kaise pata chala ki soniya kabir se pareshaan ho rahi thi ? "  Wo maine soniya ke chehre se pata laga liya . It was quite vishible . " Waah ! isse kehte hai saccha pyaar . Wo pareshaan to aashiq kare bawaal . " Yehi hai shaam ki masti humaari . Bas ! din ke saare tensions ko hum shaam ko bhoola dete hai . Bas humari baaton ka koi the end nahi hota . Par koi na koi mill hi jaata hai jo end karwa deta hai . " Vishnu ka phone hai . Jaldi aao counter pe ." Hostel ka ekmaatra coolie hai yeh , hum sab isko sms bulaate hai - Shaam Me Samachaar dene wala . Mera phone ? Zaroor ghar se aaya hoga , abhi aata hun yaar. 


Hostel ke ek ore woh chal raha hai toh ek ore -


Simmy , priya aur nishita apne room me shaam ka topic discuss kar rahe hai . Har baar ki  tarah nishita ka topic vishnu hai par iss baar simmy aur priya ka topic bhi vishnu hi hai . " Ab kya karna hai nishi ? Aaj tum to dekh hi rahi thi ki function ki taiyyariyon me aur kya taiyaar ho raha tha ? " Simmy aur nishita ne raag pakda . Aaj nishita ka dill toota hai par usme itni himmat hai ki woh khud ko sambhaal le .
 " Nahi simmy ! jo maine dekha woh shayad sach nahi hai . "   
" Kya sach nahi hai nishi ? Tu andhi ho gayi hai kya ? Vishnu aur soniya me kuch pak raha hai aur woh bhi bahut teji se. " 
" Jo bhi pak raha hai , pakta rahe . Mujhe usse koi farak nahi padta . Vishnu ko main pyaar karti hun ."  
Nishita ko beech me hi priya ne tok diya - " Toh yehi toh problem hai . Tum vishnu ko pyaar karti ho par woh soniya se karta hai . Tumne toh abhi tak usko bola tak nahi ki you love him aur woh soniya toh dekhte hi bol di. " 
Nishita ka pyaar abhi shuru hi huwa tha ki usko pyaar ke side-effects jhelne pad rahe hai . Usse darr hai pyaar ke khone ka . "  Haan ! shayad galti meri hi hai . Mujhe usse apne dill ki baat keh deni chayiye thi . Lekin agar vishnu ko soniya pasand hai toh main un dono ke beech nahi aaungi. Hat jaaungi main raaste se . " 
Simmy aur nishita ki baat priya ko raas nahi aayi  - " Dekh nishi ! abhi itni jaldi haar mat maan . Ek baar tum vishnu se baat kyu nahi kar leti ? " 
" Yeh baat sahi hai . Nishi , tum abhi chalo ." Simmy  chahti hai ki woh abhi vishnu se baat kare . 
" Haan ! nishi chal abhi chal . Arre ! aaj pehli baar simmy ne sahi baat boli hai . Chal ! hum dono tumhare saath hai . " 
Nishita ko ab koi aur darr nahi hai siwaay vishnu ko khone ka . Uski na toh ho hi nahi  sakti hai ab . Sar ko halka sa hila kar haan ka ishaara de diya . Aur isi ke saath teeno nikal pade  boys hostel ki ore . Teeno me pakde jaane ka darr bilkul nahi hai . Nishita ko kuch jaanna hai aur woh usse sirf Vishnu hi bata sakta hai . 

Sunday, 17 April 2011

Clickopedia - 6 !!!

Deepika Padukone in
Dum Maro Dum : 
Look at the way she sizzles in it !
Sensuous

Glamorous

Grooving

Eroticious

Thursday, 14 April 2011

Untitled Story - Ubel's Intentions :

" Jab maut sar chadhkar taandav karti hai tab bhagwan bhi zindagi nahi bacha pata . Aur batao uss ladke ke baare me ." Ubel dheere-dheere saari jaankari haasil karna chah raha hai . Aur yeh saabu bhi sab kuch batane ko taiyyaar hai . Pataal ki yeh saajish poore swargalok ko hila sakti hai . Saabu ko vishnu ki itni jaankari kaha se mili par wo yeh sab Ubel ko bata raha hai - " Sarkar ! wo abhi sirf 18 saal ka baccha hai . Kisi vidyalay me apni padhaai kar raha hai . 16 saal ki umar me usne aatma-hatya kee thi . Waha woh bilkul akela hai . Sarkar ! ek baat puchni hai , jab hume pehle se pata tha ki woh hi mogul hai toh humne usko pehle hi kyun nahi maar diya ? " Waise yeh sawaal thoda chaukane wala hai . Inhe yeh sab pehle se hi pata tha , yeh jaante the ki vishnu hi mogul hai . Kya ubel vishnu ko maarna chahta hai ? " Saabu ! suna nahi kya dharti pe ek niyam hai ki samay se pehle na kisi ko kuch milla hai aur na kisi ka kuch gaya hai . Marna toh tay tha uss bacche ka par shayad bhagwan ko yehi manjoor tha . Hum usse maarenge par abhi nahi . Abhi aur bahut kuch karna hai usko . Woh humare bahut kaam aayega . Jaise insaano ke dushman hai , waise humare bhi hai . Maarega woh sabko , jeetayega humko . " Saare bhed khul rahe hai . Vishnu nahi jaanta ki uska yeh kaam bilkul asaan nahi hai . Paap aur punya ki ladaai me paap ke paas jyada tazurbaa hai par punya ke paas hai shakti . Saabu abhi chup nahi rehne wala tha - " Huzoor ! aapke bure dimaag me kya chal raha hai ? Kahi aap usko istemaal to nahi na karna chahte hai ? " Iss sawaal ka jawaab ubel ne ek badi daraavni hansi se diya . Pataal ke uss kamre me achanak se diye jalne lage . Hawa me haiwaniyat aur bhi jyada phail gayi . Zameen ke  andar se aag ki lapte ajeeb - ajeeb si aawaaze nikaalne lagi . Mare huwe bande ab aur bhi teji se un lapto me samaane lage . " Sarkar ! aapki jai ho " Saabu ubel ki chaaplusi karne se nahi thak raha . Woh ubel ka wafaadar hai . Ubel ki krur hansi phir se pataal ki buraai ko badhane lagi - " Murakh ! meri nahi , paap hi paap karega raaj . " Itna kehte hi aag ki lapte kursi ke peeche se uthne lagi aur ubel apni jagah se gaayab ho gaya . " Sarkar ! Sarkar ! aap kaha chale gaye ? "  Saabu bhi vishwaas nahi kar paa raha , " lagta hai sarkar ki saari shaktiyaan jaag rahi hai . Kitna intezaar karna padega hume dharti pe raaj karne se . Paap hi paap karega raaj "